Insight Spin Bikes Can You Give Me Some Insight On The Quality Of My Poem?

Can you give me some insight on the quality of my poem? - insight spin bikes

His world is in the pit,
Recognition of the earth under our feet.
Spinning,
To lose control.
And it was never
Nothing more.
A life prediction
The acquisition --
my existence.
A sigh --
You Complete Me
devour me.
And I'm drowning in a sea of thoughts.
Drowning in subtle
Apathy on.
It is not broken, do not be confused.
Complete.
Invaded.
A mixture of two people.